Trainer ,Rylen Hood

[Rylen]

[atrb=border,0,true][cs=2][atrb=style, text-align: center;][atrb=style, width: 400px; border-radius:30px; padding: 5px; border-right: 5px solid #01b296; border-left: 5px solid #01b296; background-color:c4bcaa, btable] Rylen
[atrb=valign,top][atrb=style, width:185; padding-right:2px;] PERSONAL INFORMATION NAME: Rylen Hood AGE: nineteen GENDER: male HOMETOWN: Nimbasa, Unova GROUP: trainer OCCUPATION: Rylen is a student at the local university where he is studying Medicine and Music. When not studying he battles for money on the side. PERSONALITY: • Has a caring attitude • Loves to laugh • Tend to say stupid stuff • cooperative • helpful • loyal to friend • can be a loud mouth at time LIKES: • cold weather • ice cream • music DISLIKES: •People who abuse pokemon • when people touch his icecream • dishonest people HISTORY: Rylen was born to a middle class family in Nimbasa. An only child his father was the professor of Nimbasa U and his mother was a housewife. His grandparents were breeders and he spend a lot of time with them. When he moved to Hoenn at the age of ten after his father got a job in Lilycove. He was given five eggs and an Oshawott from Prof. Juniper. He then moved to Lilycove city and he fell in love with pokemon even more after seeing the many pokemon from the Pokemon Contests. That was when he decided to travel with his pokemon after they hatched. After meeting with Prof. Birch he took the Hoenn Challenge and started off his journey meet many new people and pokemon. After beating Wallace he took his way to Evergrand where he lost and after this he promised to get stronger by training and traveling the main land. Nowadays he has taken a break from the league challenge is focusing more on school where he studies Pokemon Biology and music.. Rylen now lives in his own apartment in Lilycove with his six pokemon Kahuna, Moe, Colbert, Echo, Roni, and Bloom and he spends his time taking pictures or playing his guitar Samantha.. Recently he has a yearning to visit some of the people he met which includes Red. Rylen has recently heard of the new threat targeting the regions and this peaked his interest. He loves pokemon and anybody who uses them for evil angers him.	[atrb=width,225px,true][atrb=valign,top][atrb=style, width:185; padding-left: 2px;] POKEMON PARTY [insert pokemon sprite] SPECIES: Samurott NICKNAME:Kahuna GENDER: male NATURE: Mild MOVES: Surf, Ice Beam, Waterfall, X-scissor SPECIES: Krookodile NICKNAME:Moe GENDER: male NATURE: Adament MOVES: Dig, Crunch, Dragon Claw, Earthquake SPECIES: Mienshao NICKNAME:Roni GENDER: male NATURE: Brave MOVES: Jump Kick, Acrobatics, Drain Punch, Aura Sphere SPECIES: Braviary NICKNAME:Colbert GENDER: male NATURE: Lonely MOVES: Fly, Rock Slide, Crush claw, Shadow Claw SPECIES: Chandelure NICKNAME:Echo GENDER: male NATURE: Mild MOVES: Psychic, Energy Ball, Shadow Ball, Flamethrower SPECIES: Lilligant NICKNAME:Bloom GENDER: female NATURE: Timid MOVES: Energy Ball, Giga Drain, Petal Dance, Magical Leaf PC STORAGE [tiny sprite images here]
[cs=2] GREETINGS, MY NAME IS Kathara. I AM Nineteen YEARS OLD AND I HAVE BEEN ROLEPLAYING FOR a few months. ALSO, I'D LIKE YOU TO KNOW I am very HM02 and if you miss with my TM87 I will have to HM01 you.

[Pearl]

First things first, sorry for the wait.

Could you clean up the profile a bit? Getting rid of the "[Insert Tiny Sprite]" and "[Insert Pokemon Sprite]", you know the drill. Changing the thread title to "RYLEN HOOD, TRAINER" would also make it easier to identify yourself and keep you in line with the other trainers. One more thing, if you're going to have everything capitalized, do it like that; having something in lower case in a mixture with capitalized words make the application look messy. There are also some spelling/grammar mistakes, so a read through of your profile and correcting them would be a good thing to do as well.

That being said, it looks like a promising character and I'll look through it again once you've changed the stuff. You're on your way to a temporary approval my friend!

[Caleb]

Like Pearl said, all you have to do is clean up your application a bit and you're all set to go.